I like how you made this eye catching with the pictures. Also the title made people want to know more about the post. This reminds me how I forgot to dress up on book character day, so Mum and Dad had to come to school and find me so I can put on my fairy costume. Next time you should add more information.
Hi Lauren, I like how you made this eye catching with the pictures because eye catching blogs get people to stop and have a look. Also the title made people want to know more about the post. This reminds me how I forgot to dress up on book character day, so Mum and Dad had to come to school and find me so I can put on my fairy costume. What’s your favourite book? My favourite book is Emily Windsnap because it includes everything I like, the ocean, mermaids, tropical islands, atlantis, mysteries and other things. Next time you should add more information about your day because there wasn’t much writing and I want to know more about book character day.
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Hi Lauren.
ReplyDeleteI like how you made this eye catching with the pictures. Also the title made people want to know more about the post. This reminds me how I forgot to dress up on book character day, so Mum and Dad had to come to school and find me so I can put on my fairy costume. Next time you should add more information.
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Hi Lauren, I improved my comment.
ReplyDeleteHi Lauren, I like how you made this eye catching with the pictures because eye catching blogs get people to stop and have a look. Also the title made people want to know more about the post. This reminds me how I forgot to dress up on book character day, so Mum and Dad had to come to school and find me so I can put on my fairy costume. What’s your favourite book? My favourite book is Emily Windsnap because it includes everything I like, the ocean, mermaids, tropical islands, atlantis, mysteries and other things. Next time you should add more information about your day because there wasn’t much writing and I want to know more about book character day.