Friday 5 August 2016

My poem

 Jedi is a Cyclone
Waiting to happen
she is a clown
Performing in a circus
she is a candy cane
Following me around
she is a radio
Singing her heart out
She  is a party pooper
Running around
she is a hurricane
Running fast
Shes my friend
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5 comments:

  1. Allan Robertson6 August 2016 at 09:49

    What a wonderfully playful piece of writing. I love the phrase, 'she is radio, singing her heart out.' I wonder what songs she likes to sing. You can never go wrong with songs from The Sound of Music.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  2. Anonymous8 August 2016 at 13:08

    This is great Lauren it tells a lot about Jedi.Will she really cause a cyclone? But try and do she will a CAPITAL.

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  3. Anonymous17 August 2016 at 14:05

    Hi I am nikoli your closest friend. This is great Lauren it tells a lot about Jedi.Will she really cause a cyclone? But try and do she will a CAPITAL.

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