Monday 1 August 2016

the rescue

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3 comments:

  1. Unknown2 August 2016 at 19:20

    Well done on creating an interesting storybook, Lauren. You have added some detail and I finished each page wanting to know what happened next. You are also using interesting punctuation. I am looking forward to your next creation.

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  2. Allan Robertson7 August 2016 at 18:28

    I enjoyed reading your story Lauren. I like the way you have made it easier for the reader to follow the character's dialogue. There are some very scary parts to your story. I am glad you resolved it with a happy ending.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  3. Anonymous17 August 2016 at 14:38

    I enjoyed reading your story Lauren. I like the way you have made it easier for the reader to follow the character's dialogue. There are some very scary parts to your story. I am glad you resolved it with a happy ending.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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