Kia ora Lauren, I love your piece of work. It brings out a garden and a girl playing in the sun. Next time you can improve maybe by um putting some more into it but I do think it was good.
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Kia ora Lauren, I love your piece of work. It brings out a garden and a girl playing in the sun. Next time you can improve maybe by um putting some more into it but I do think it was good.
ReplyDeleteHi Lauren. I like your butterfly and the garden. I think it would be better if you added some flowers but it's a great picture.
ReplyDeleteThank you.Next time I will add some flowers.
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