Thursday, 4 May 2017
Week One
2 comments:
Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
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Hi it is Lauren from St. Bernadette's Primary School. I really liked the pictures you put in about Harry Potter, they were really cute. That is a really good book to be reading. I like how the writing is easy to read. It was helpful because you used a lot of detail. Next time you could balance the text and pictures. I think that you used the pictures that related to the story.
ReplyDeleteHi Lauren its Lauren thanks for that positive comment next time I will try to make more text
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