Wednesday, 3 August 2016

My Poem

I am as
Quick as a Cheetah
                    Cute as a Kitten
Sad as a Homeless puppy roaming the streets   
Nice as a Butterfly  
Mean as a Wolf  
Cold as a Freezer.
Hot as a an oven when it is on high
Weak as a Lady bug
Strong as a Hippopotamus
Loud as a Frog in the middle of the night  
Quiet as a Mouse when it is asleep
Tough as a lion  
Gentle as a leaf
Brave as a war hero just about to fight
Shy as a Ant
Tame as a Bunny with a tail as white as cotton
Wild as a jaguar
Lazy as a sloth
Busy as a Bumble bee
Put it all together and you’ve got Lovely Lauren!

2 comments:

  1. What a wonderful collection of similes. YOu have also amassed an interesting selection of animals. And I just love, 'Hot as an oven on high.' If you had to choose to be one for the day I wonder which one it would be.

    I look forward to your next blog post.

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  2. Hi there, my name is Reagan and I am a student in room 5 at Awahono School. I really like your poem. It made me think of writing one myself. Have you thought about adding some art to your poem?

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