Monday, 25 May 2015
5sc
I see a forest.
And I think that there is is a treasare.
It is peaceful.
It is calm.
It is green and wild.
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I like your adjectives you've chosen Lauren - very descriptive and I can imagine this in my mind. What type of forest is it? What do you smell? Hear?
ReplyDeleteIs there another word you could start your sentences with? Keep up the great writing - I enjoyed reading your 5 sentence challenge this week.
Miss Blair :)